The Garden of Eden was made
by God,
Adam the first man to ever
trod.
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Speaks of a utopia seductively becoming a very tragic loss. The greatest loss in the history of mankind, caused by man himself. Beautifully told. A wonderful job heather. Thank you.
Though this Biblical story of Adam and Eve is known to everyone, when put in such rhyming verse, it has achieved a novelty and can be enjoyed even by grown ups!
That's all, we're here to work, suffer and pay for their sins. Simple as that.
Lovely and well said.