Wednesday, August 19, 2020

Bi Solar Comments

Rating: 3.0

On the other side of the tide,
The ocean has something carefully hidden
In her cruelty, she is never releasing her dead
But on a blood moon she allows their prayers to be said
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Bill Cantrell
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 30 August 2020

The lovely poem and its illustration say so much about the caprices of nature.

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Susan Williams 19 August 2020

Part 2. Lines running smooth as silk into each other- -end rhymes so effortless one is never jerked around and given whiplash- - I hate to tell you, Bill, but this is good poetry. You have joined the ranks of poet a long long time ago and we are to be congratulated on our good fortune! ! 10+++++

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Susan Williams 19 August 2020

Part 1. Bill, when you started on PH, you said you didn't consider yourself a poet- -I hope by now you have changed your mind. You were either wrong as could be when you said that or my goodness how you have grown! ! ! I think both. And this poem proves it.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 19 August 2020

Lovely poem. Shape shifting reality.

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