Binapani Mahaling

Binapani Mahaling

Bargarh (Odisha, India) Now in Baltimore, USA
Wednesday, August 30, 2017

Bhurshaa Kiraa (Kosli Poem 145) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kalaa dhus dhus bhursha kiraa lukichhe patar talen
Phur phuriaa dihe taar kaahaake dekhaabaa laajen.
Patar khaai khaai mutaa hauchhe dhus kaali bilei
Bhuska hei laajen maruchhe kenke jaaitin palei.
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 August 2017

Pat pat kari denaa piti udigalaa eiphulun se phul Mulki mulki hasuthilaa aaij sabu laaguchhe sundar. Aakaash nu dharti tak udlaa sabuaaden jaai Paahaad nu saagar tak kichhi ke chhadlaa naain. A very beautiful colloquial poem. Enjoyed though with difficulty for script. Thanks poet for sharing it. 10 for the poem.

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Binapani Mahaling 30 August 2017

thank you so much subahas....I am so happy that you read it touches heart......

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Gajanan Mishra 30 August 2017

suaad laaglaa, dhanyabad.

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Binapani Mahaling 30 August 2017

dhanybaat agyaan....apankar kabitaa muin padhsi.....apankar nu prerana bi nesi......

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Binapani Mahaling

Binapani Mahaling

Bargarh (Odisha, India) Now in Baltimore, USA
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