Kalaa dhus dhus bhursha kiraa lukichhe patar talen
Phur phuriaa dihe taar kaahaake dekhaabaa laajen.
Patar khaai khaai mutaa hauchhe dhus kaali bilei
Bhuska hei laajen maruchhe kenke jaaitin palei.
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dhanybaat agyaan....apankar kabitaa muin padhsi.....apankar nu prerana bi nesi......
Pat pat kari denaa piti udigalaa eiphulun se phul Mulki mulki hasuthilaa aaij sabu laaguchhe sundar. Aakaash nu dharti tak udlaa sabuaaden jaai Paahaad nu saagar tak kichhi ke chhadlaa naain. A very beautiful colloquial poem. Enjoyed though with difficulty for script. Thanks poet for sharing it. 10 for the poem.
thank you so much subahas....I am so happy that you read it touches heart......