Monday, June 30, 2014

Bhool Comments

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Woh piyar na tha ek bhool thi bas,
Main aaj bhi usper nadim hoon,
Jazbat ka ek toofan utha,
Main beh nikli,
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Geetha Jayakumar 05 January 2015

Aapki kavita bahuth pyaari hai. Aur aisi rah pe ja nikloon, Jahan kante hon na pather ho, Phoolon se bhara mera pauda ho. Khushboo se bhara mera gulshan ho. Loved it.

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Ramesh Rai 12 September 2014

Vakayee aap bahut sunder likhti hai.shayad Amritaji k baad aap ki likhi huyee nazmon ko padh raha hun.

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Ramesh Rai 12 September 2014

Vakayee aap bahut sunder likhti hai.shayad Amritaji k baad aap ki likhi huyee nazmon ko padh raha hun.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 June 2014

Confessions provide peace of mind but regrets make us restless. This poem is a nice description of confessions and regrets.

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