Beyound The Self Comments

Need Pure Soul, To Peep Inside, I Submerge Thoughts Beyond My Shores. philosophical and spiritual. i was sensing your great need to go beyond what i earthly. thanku. dear poetess. tony

thank you so much friend. be happy.be blessed.

The second line of each couplet is very powerful, poetically expressive and builds to a climax. You have sustained this in each of the four couplets. Please keep writing. A line such as submerge thoughts beyond my shores could very well have been from a very well known poet.

Amusing poem,10+++++++++ I Need Pure Soul, To Peep Inside, To Submerge with thoughts Beyond the Shores.

Profound piece of poetry. Impressive style of writing.

your poetry is abs unique keep at it But try to avoid too many caps The flow is lost like water ripples Good one indeed be bold This could be like unrequited LOVE GREAT dO KINDLY GLOSS MY Mom's Smiles

In the moments when desire fills you up with joy and takes one to a dream like world. Those moments are precious. So artistically expressed in this poem.

Pure words wd pure thoughts. beautiful penned it.

Write comment. Very impressive expression of unfulfilled desires, Dear Konab. There is something pure which could not be explained in words. Read my ars poetica named, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks.