Monday, May 11, 2009

! Beyond Wild Blue Yonder Comments

Rating: 3.5

Air water and fire
Are within us to ire
Under ‘it', ' I' and the ‘upper I'
Devoid of reason and desire
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Vidyadhar Durgekar
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Vidi Writes 14 May 2009

No one knows what lies beyond the blue yonder But its sure all get prepared and pertained. Sweet little one. Good read. Thank you.

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Sandra Fowler 14 May 2009

Lovely last lines. Your rhymes add music to the mood. 10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Reshma Ramesh 13 May 2009

beautiful poem sir...............

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Wendy Cheuvront 12 May 2009

This is very nice. : -) Thanks for the invite.

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Indira Babbellapati 12 May 2009

this body and mind will continue to provide perfect stage for all dramas till 'i' ceases!

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2009

good write...i liked the true philosophy it carries inside...10

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Surya . 12 May 2009

at the time of meet all questions have to answered.nice poem.posted 10 surya

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Anjali Sinha 12 May 2009

You me and they Shall meet one day Far from world of today Beyond wild blue yonder Yes very true this is a gentle reminder for us that 'thou art dust and unto dust thou shalt return'

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Sandra Martyres 11 May 2009

Very neat poem - short and to the point 10

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