Beyond The Thoughts Comments

Deep, brooding thoughts of a road traveled long ago, what you have achieved gives you no answers no conclusion to the puzzle that is life as you search for a messiah to save you from your disillusionment! Superb write! If you have time could you read and comment on my new poem ''Through Nature's Window'

Beautiful poem but this poem is Beyond my thoughts of understanding. Still I will make a try. Please do correct it.. First Stanza....Why to show false tears, when one don't feel any emotion to it. There are people who gain a lot either sympathy or power by showing it. Second stanza... A simple prayer, that everything will be alright by tomorrow. But when one wake up, one find sailing in the same boat if not caught by storms. Which power is going to save? Can a prayer save one? Third Stanza...Poor deer is dead, as it couldn't bear the heavy beats of drum. It couldn't catch up with life and it gave up its life. Now people are visiting which power to bring it back to life...Yes, to the one who show miracles as seen in T.V. Last Stanza...Unknown crowds are there in door steps means they believe you are blessed with some power to show miracles. If one couldn't meet with expectation of people, surely no one but they are quiet enough to nail. Sir, may be I am wrong in judging it, but I think it this way. But definitely please do write notes regarding this poem. I loved reading it.

Though I was unable to reach me to that level, still I feel that Dinesh - yes, there is some logic in your thoughts and thinking. Eloquently you spoke about your thoughts what I respect and let me realize that enabling me to agree with you.

Now is the time to remember the movement of truth...... A beautiful poem with such philosophical interpretations and spirit.

Too abstract a philosophy far above my understanding....... but beautiful diction giving the impression that it contains some abstruse truths!

Your thoughts are beyond the level of raising any question. Let alone the answer. Beautiful lines.