Saturday, June 1, 2013

Beyond The Tears Comments

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Beyond cold tears, old fears, exotic dream
Extends to mend trust broken, to restore
Years lost, cost dear, discovers joy once more,
Opens door to tender longing's gleam.
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Bri Edwards 11 July 2013

well, this was shorter than the last one. i guess i will stop at reading two of your poems. i DO have other things i want to do today! again it seems i would enjoy the poem more if i tried to follow the meaning of the words less, and read more quickly, catching the rhymes as i go. thanks for sharing.

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Paul Brookes 01 June 2013

Beautiful poem Ah the futures calling 10/10 BB : O)

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