Beyond The Sunset Comments

this is a huge thoughtful poem with wast canvas, with wonderful imagery....well penned

Very marvelous depiction of the dusk with a serene ocean canvas. Congrats!

dear catrina, its so long since i have been around and read you.....this was a beautiful poem to start with......thanks for sharing.merry Christmas! love reshma

I love this, my friend really superbly composed words are enchanting....I read with awe a piece from Catrina...really amazing... as if I'm seeing sparks above me mingling with the colors of the sunset/dusk and a beautiful dawn as you stated here... really a stunning piece...lovely and flows with depth.....life beyond the sunset.... I have a lot more to say to praise this piece but I wont be finished....so to end.... this is EXCELLENT.... 10++++++ Lovelots, Snow

The format, and a divide in between, putting it together in the same page reflects deep feelings and intense imagination not content really. Keep on saying whatever you want to say. We love reading your lines Catrina,

captivating allusion....so refreshing...EXCELLENT!

Go! Beyond the devouring twilight, Time shall say the ruins of yester nights Sojourn to rest......... O dear sunset on the mist of sea Shall I stride where winds will take my feet Yet.........shall I build pillars Imprinting goodwill on clouds and trees Go! Bravely beyond sunset O dear Go! Not worrying darkness on fields Twilight shall soon shake hands with dawn Where fresh morning dews shall bless all leaves Spreading balms of spring fragrance, so sweet An insignia of bright morrow on the glorious break of dawn This is really beyond the sunset, a great poem from every aspect, Catrina. I know that I will read it again and again. Warm Regards. Naseer

Dear Ms. Heart - your heart is here, that is why you have felt this so intensely that everything here is poemic, poesic, delightfully artistic. My heart goes singing... la la la...10+++

a brilliant composition.............................

'Beyond the Sunset' is the fountain of ecstatic bliss. CP

Go! Beyond the devouring twilight, Time shall say the ruins of yester nights Sojourn to rest......... O dear sunset on the mist of sea Shall I stride where winds will take my feet Yet.........shall I build pillars Imprinting goodwill on clouds and trees Go! Bravely beyond sunset O dear Go! Not worrying darkness on field beautiful spacing of beauties nature and warmth of passions, i adore your style

I'm dreaming of bright tomorrow on the depths of the ocean Half-journeyed, half-forgotten looms the vision in my mind this shows your depth.10

Oh...what A VERY STUNNING write..rich in imagery and your flow of words are lovely. This is your poetry at your best..YOUR BEST..wow.. Now, you have revealed yourself..the Princess of poetry.. I love most these lines.... witness the velvet haze in crimson shower, red-hot As it meets the cold zephyr shivering my veins Twilight is creeping struggling for gold I see myself beyond the sunset where my future unfolds

Wow Catrina - - I was transported - - great write.....10 + + + Fay

oh catrina excellence i see fantastically beautiful finished or not into my favs

Goodness me! what fine wording Excellent flow of poetic word My goodness lady.... These pieces of yours need to be publish My goodness....What a talent..what a talent..

It does not need a title the content is enough 10 Daniel