To Emily Dickinson _
my etemal sister
The horror of the shattered mirror,
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Such an outstanding well crafted poem, the rhyme you used is such a delight for ears..Cristina Teodor
What a great poem, you rhyme at the right places and the words just flow. You have so a great talent for this in your other writings. Such a great tribute to your favorite poet.10+++
A lovely piece; can sense the rhythmic ticking of the clock; love the dramatic feel of this poem. -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
A very lovely poetic tribute to Emily Dickinson. I like the inference that time flies even when the clock is stopped. Very nice indeed.
A LOVELY TRIBUTE..WORDED VERY BEAUTIFULLY...LOVELY...10
What a wonderful tribute to your beloved poet! Nicely done!
Tsira, I love Emily Dickinson, I too think we are kindred spirits. Love your salute to her. Dorothy
Excellent poem Tsira, impeccable ryhme and meter. Best wishes, Andrew
A first posting on this site with such power and poetic clarity sets an unenviable standard Tsira but I think it a challenge you are equal to... Rgds, Ivan
Oh, very good poem with rhymes on it fixed perfectly., I like this poem very much so I give you 10 marks.
beyond the skies dream dies in deep blue here in dust covered earth, we play in endless symphony trying to feel happy thanks. md
a sensitive write, goes to show that this universe is a boundless awning of inspiration
Tsira, this is a beautifully crafted poem that draws its inspiration from the words of a very special poet. The phrasing of your poem is excellent, and the subject matter has just the right amount of melancholy without lapsing into the maudlin. Your final couplet leaves the reading with a feeling of hope. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I gave this poem a 9 becauise the meaning is too unclear to me. What I did evaluate however, had no deficiencies in any way. This was a three verse poem, which is the ideal size for a poem. When I see a three verse poem, I know that I am reading a great poet. also, The internal structure was perfect. Any statement can be effectively made using this internal structure. Wonderful. GW62
Tsira, 'BRILLIANT'. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David
I love the idea, Tsira, and you express the understandable connection you feel so intensely and so well. Emily D's work has such captivating time-breaking power.