Sunday, August 8, 2010

Beyond The Sea Comments

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Beyond the sea
I know I can be
Everything I want to be
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Ruth Rayment
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Adeline Foster 25 March 2012

While this poem is full of feeling and well written, you need to get out of yourself and embrace the world. There are so many subjects that would widen your focus and bring out the depth of your talent. Read mine - The Bloom of Youth - and - My Heart is Native - Adeline

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