Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Beyond The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Sea
Whispering sonnets of a hidden world
collecting at my feet
Washing back, stripping my story
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David Desantis 06 October 2008

very soothing...i liked it...good imagery, almost as if the water is calming you by allowing you to remember tranquil times.

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David Threadgold 17 September 2008

Hi There. A truly wonderful story in verse. I enjoyed the read thankyou. Regards Dave T.

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