Friday, June 8, 2007

Beyond The Pale Comments

Rating: 2.3

If i go pale beyond the pale
will my family follow?

I can only wish
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John Kipling Lewis
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K Holoholo 05 November 2007

I don't get this one. Starts and ends OK, but I get lost in the middle

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

3. A lot of abstractions that say nothing and convey nothing to the reader. The other reviewers have said that they did not understand the poem; this is why.

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Deanna Victor 05 November 2007

I don't feel that this one has significance only to the author.

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Donna Robertson 03 August 2007

I don't quite understand this one.

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

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