Saturday, November 12, 2016

Beyond The Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Relations that flourish in all the weathers,
A bird that has no wings and no feathers,
Still flies in a day so sunny and bright,
Or a dark night having lost moon light,
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Tajudeen Shah 14 November 2016

its been quite some time such emotional cadence occurred. the usual images that linger around emitting their unusual radiance! the theme that still remain beyond comprehension, still adhering to the very corridor of intimacies intact. HayakAllah.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2016

Weathers fly with emotion of sky. This is amazing that a bird without wings too fly high and far. This is magical expression of imagery. Injured person in love needs healing of love. Thoughtful poem this is.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2016

Well expressive poem shared. Thanks. ..10

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Khalida Bano Ali 12 November 2016

A great poem, friendship is the super love.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 12 November 2016

Wow you are so thoughtful. Nice word arrangement there. Thank you!

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2016

A friend in need is a friend indeed.....a nicely composed poem 10

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Indeed this is well composed!

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Bharati Nayak 12 November 2016

Relations that flourish in all the weathers, A bird that has no wings and no feathers, Still flies in a day so sunny and bright, Or a dark night having lost moon light, Defending me even when I am wrong, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - For you is a nameless feeling, Injured in love I need your heeling. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -An injured feeling so beautifully expressed.

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