Monday, July 7, 2008

Beyond The Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

The past in the skies
The present on the earth
The future in your heart
Right now
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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sky dreams 28 July 2009

very short and simple.. but it really makes you think 10+

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

it is so good short lines with alots senses

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Tsira Goge 08 July 2008

Very beautiful poems as though continuations ' Beyond The Skies'/// 10... Sincerely, Tsira

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M M 08 July 2008

This is a very beautiful poem, melting nature and love. 10!

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Kesav Easwaran 08 July 2008

i wonder what could be the present and past participles...well, good deeds good heart are the factors deciding a future 'past place' in the sky...enjoyable

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