Beyond Thehorizon Comments
Yonder in the West,
Just before it sets,
Sun lingers, as if to cast one last look
Over what it illumined through the day.
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A beautiful and well penned write. We may not know what is on the other side of the horizon but we do know that the sun sets in the west. Keep your light shining for humanity. Very good.
A very sweet write....! 'Shall I also go down the horizon just like the sun'? Probably the same thought, I have tried to answer in my latest post... The Inevitable End. Sir when time permits, please read!
Amazing....just want to add That: LAUGH through your heart and dance in the rain; CHERISH the memories and IGNORE the pain; LOVE, learn, forget and forgive: REMEMBER you have ONLY ONE LIFE to live! ! ! ! !
wonderful sir great imagery......beautifully composed lovely :)
Beautiful poem! Thank you for share. I have also used the horison in a try to catch my feelings in a poem called the river. You may see there how much I can relate my thoughs to this poem. Wonderful!
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7/20/2025 2:33:38 AM # 1.0.0
" mind's eye" , not " minds eye" Well, you could TRY to emulate/imitate the Sun, as you suggest! It's said: " Nothing ventured, nothing gained! " to MyPoemList :) bri Good Luck! it seems you wrote poem n 1973. If so, you must have already felt OLD! !