Monday, June 27, 2011

Beyond The Grave Comments

Rating: 4.0

They stumbled over each other
to reach the only exit
from the dark and putrid room.
Here they had been confined
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Buxton Shippy
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 July 2011

although i see the imagery, not sure though of the connotative meaning... but anyway, will rate it 8 out of 10... keep it up in poetry!

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Adeline Foster 30 June 2011

Buxton: It's good but getting serious and yet the caring still comes through. Try mine - Memory is a Cheating Thing. Adeline

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