They stumbled over each other
to reach the only exit
from the dark and putrid room.
Here they had been confined
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Buxton: It's good but getting serious and yet the caring still comes through. Try mine - Memory is a Cheating Thing. Adeline
although i see the imagery, not sure though of the connotative meaning... but anyway, will rate it 8 out of 10... keep it up in poetry!