Friday, July 24, 2009

Beyond The Future Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have been back to the future, and to the future beyond,
Utopia, is not all its cracked up to be, and I need you to understand
yes! you will have the life of simple living, there is nothing that you need,
no grocery shopping, no work, there is no need for greed!
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Fay Slimm 01 August 2009

Beyond the future is a unique concept Bob and dealt with here in such a way that scary comes to mind - - must agree along with the verse that I too prefer the excitement of NOT knowing....... a great write and yes - -to be continued please...10 + ++ Fay

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 July 2009

This poem travels through the time. From utopian past to the emotionless future. It also encircles the present realities and genetics wonders. a multi-dimensional approach, concluded in the last stanza with the excitement of not knowing. A gift of Bob's life long wisdom indeed. 'Life in the future is so static, like iron, life is cast there's no hunger, wars or resentment, i feel, I belong, in the past! the excitement of not knowing, and of my computerized life the selection of my loved one, or my choice! of a wife! ' Regards Naseer

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