Beyond The Frame Comments

The feel is more important than the frame, good one, Indira.10

nice and beautifully framed............

ye; the flavour and the fumes are one and different at the same time...nice presentation...thanks

A charming portrait of two lovers framed with a poet's eye. I love your 'just bathed sky'. Your final couplet is intriguing and leaves the reader wondering. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A brilliant piece Indira, rich in imagery in the first part and ending with a stunning impact which tears off the pretension in the relationship. A perfect 10.

yes...a deep and...well, intriguing poem. interesting. wonderfully expressed. thank you.

May be an ad or a picture-card or if I'm incorrect a real scene has inspired you to feel a morning raga out of it....your style can however inspire the reader....thank you Indira

you have taken the readers to their teen age. nice shan

...visible was not visible to their eyes but invisible was very much within the frame...a nice poem, indira....

You aptly titled this poem 'beyond the frame' for this is the take home message. Cliches such as 'looking beyond the obvious' or 'things aren't what they seem' or 'don't describe a book by its cover' similarly describe this beyond the frame perspective. However, you have done well to pen this idea so elegantly in your own words. It also fittingly portrays the current role of electronic music devices in our world today. A delightful and thought provoking read. Thanks for sharing.