Sunday, January 17, 2016

Beyond The Door Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shivers sensually tickle my feet with cold,
As I lay in bed recovering after a long night out,
Emotions within start to unfold,
Imploding love where everything else apart from her I flout.
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Aditya Mudbhary
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Emily Cartmell 23 January 2016

Love this poem -Emily,12

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Jimoh Ibrahim 20 January 2016

Cool and wonderful. Love this piece. Its wonderful

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 January 2016

Verily, a nice expression

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Daya Nandan 19 January 2016

wow this is a superb piece.. good share..10

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2016

With the muse of love. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 January 2016

Changes in the world may come and go, but this wonderful drafting will remain mind. Wise sharing.10

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Aditya Mudbhary

Aditya Mudbhary

Patan, Nepal
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