Thursday, July 15, 2010

Beyond The Clouds, Dedicated To Poetiwife Comments

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I am a man with countless wounds in the heartache kingdom
As a crying baby suffers from tortures in the camp of serfdom
All around by bleed and feed soul exists only one word 'boredom'
Among the cold bushes of the crowds, I demand to be your freedom
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Okan Emanet
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Omar Ibrahim 25 July 2010

God bless you! ..how sensational! ....it's poetic like the other one :) ..well done. thanks for sharing

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A beautiful, captivating poem. Poetic language so perfectly in place. Enjoyable read, ; D

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Such an excellence has God drawn upon your face, Behind the curtains of mystery and beyond the love-maze two lines of great poetic beauty, if you confine your poems to this sphere of focus, you will write your name among the great Turkish poets I also put a bewitching Turkish wife upon such a pedestal once sometimes my friend it is necessary to let them walk upon the ground so that they embrace wisdom within Turkish culture

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Hans Vr 15 July 2010

Wow, Another very good one. So happy to read that the secrets are released. The 'in love' feelings can play mean games on us, but what finally counts and brings us real peace of mind is the love, the loving things we do. Great peace of mind for your and your poetiwife. Keep it up. Keep writing. You manage to put your feelings in verses that are a delight to the reader.

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Louis Rams 15 July 2010

surrender to this lovely poetwife for she brings you a world of spice. she released that secret from your heart and you see you're the greatest part.

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