Thursday, March 12, 2009

Beyond The Brink Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes the pain screams red the raw
And tugs the push
Into the from and jagged corners.
The furling weir
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Diana van den Berg
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Sicelo Sithole 15 March 2009

Short and sweet, a great exploration indeed. learned some few new words here as well! will check them surely today at night in my own dictionary...

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Alison Cassidy 13 March 2009

This powerful poem explores that point beyond which chaos reins and does it with great dramatic intensity and originality. You flash your discordant, painful images across the page and yet finish with a whisper and a question. Great write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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