Tuesday, June 12, 2018

Beyond The Body Comments

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Soil,
You are the endless earth
Laughingly, you conceal the violent flames of
all the pain, sufferings and all the intolerance
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manaswini dash
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 July 2018

Wow! Great poetry, Manaswini. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 June 2018

Soil, water, fire, sky love You invigorate me and I feel myself invincible. I don't want to live without you. Oh, my darling! may i give u a hug and may i be lost in ur sweet embrace....... thank u dear poetess. lovely poem full of emotion.......... tony

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Manaswini Dash 05 July 2018

Thank you very much Tony for your loving comment.Its my pleasure that you liked my poem.

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Rajnish Manga 12 June 2018

Oh, Goddess of tolerance! You are incomparable, And truly revered..... //.... Panchbhoot tatva and their role in life nicely expressed. Love has given it another dimension. Thanks for sharing the poem carrying hints of Indian philosophy.

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Manaswini Dash 05 July 2018

Thank you very much Rajnish for your encouraging comment.

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