Monday, December 12, 2005

Beyond The Barrier Comments

Rating: 4.9

If this became the last day of the world,
The sun and moon and stars mosiac hurled
Beyond the barrier of time and space
While we stand locked together face to face
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Sandra Fowler
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Nikunj Sharma 21 November 2009

this is amazing write..........the depth of your meaning capsizes the reader...keeps him hooked...........wow is the word

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2009

Astonishing imageries! heart crunching this poem i loved dear sandra! excellent! 10+

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premji premji 13 June 2009

what a poem........ absolute love................ i feel that warmth............... i hear those heartbeats....... you will vanish, but your words will never...............

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Tsira Goge 14 November 2008

It was pleasant to me awfully... Very strong poems...10...... Thank you, Sandra.......... Best wishes, Tsira

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A poem of high inspiration and profound strength. I enjoyed it. (10/10) Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Meggie Gultiano 19 November 2007

A very inspiring write of yours, Sandra...i love it.. Love, meggie

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Bill Grace 30 September 2007

She just stuns me and I mean this in the most profound and positively powerful way. Somehow a merging of Frost's 'Fire and Ice' and Elizabeth Browning's 'How Do I Love Thee' a poem as extraordinary as the land that helped to give it life. Bill Grace

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Alison Cassidy 18 September 2007

'To gaze into another's eyes and see one's own dignity mirrored there'. This is my idea of heaven and my response to your graceful words. An inspiring piece. love, Allie xxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 September 2007

Impacting thought...You paint armageddon with stunning imagery....and a wee smack of the abstract dark...Very well done, young lass! FjR

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Jim Foulk 20 April 2007

a very beautiful well said piece of great poetry.

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gone gone 21 November 2006

Hi Sandra a wonderful poem......no ifs about that.....thankyou Love, D.

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Will Barber 17 November 2006

A very moving testimony to our need to overcome barriers, Sandra. This poem moved me very much. We should all consider what we want our legacy to be - division or union. You unite the world in many ways. I admired this very much.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 10 October 2006

Selected at random, and wow! what a terrific poem. If random sampling always throws up these gems, what a consistent and accomplished writer this indicates. Patrick

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 September 2006

At the world's end towards the doomsday souls are hand-in-hand but still longing for unborn tomorrow? This is a wonderful poem Sandra.

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Duncan Wyllie 05 September 2006

This is very strong writing, leaves us admiring your talent Thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X

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R H 13 June 2006

The first two lines had me hooked - wonderful images and beautifully unforced rhymes. Warmest wishes, Justine.

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Marina Gipps 05 March 2006

Kudos...This is a great example of rhyme that doesn't abuse the flow, feeling, etc... of a poem.

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Uriah Hamilton 12 December 2005

'the future is uncertain and the end is always near' Jim Morrison

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