Beyond The Barrier Comments
If this became the last day of the world,
The sun and moon and stars mosiac hurled
Beyond the barrier of time and space
While we stand locked together face to face
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Astonishing imageries! heart crunching this poem i loved dear sandra! excellent! 10+
what a poem........ absolute love................ i feel that warmth............... i hear those heartbeats....... you will vanish, but your words will never...............
It was pleasant to me awfully... Very strong poems...10...... Thank you, Sandra.......... Best wishes, Tsira
A poem of high inspiration and profound strength. I enjoyed it. (10/10) Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
A very inspiring write of yours, Sandra...i love it.. Love, meggie
She just stuns me and I mean this in the most profound and positively powerful way. Somehow a merging of Frost's 'Fire and Ice' and Elizabeth Browning's 'How Do I Love Thee' a poem as extraordinary as the land that helped to give it life. Bill Grace
'To gaze into another's eyes and see one's own dignity mirrored there'. This is my idea of heaven and my response to your graceful words. An inspiring piece. love, Allie xxxx
Impacting thought...You paint armageddon with stunning imagery....and a wee smack of the abstract dark...Very well done, young lass! FjR
Hi Sandra a wonderful poem......no ifs about that.....thankyou Love, D.
A very moving testimony to our need to overcome barriers, Sandra. This poem moved me very much. We should all consider what we want our legacy to be - division or union. You unite the world in many ways. I admired this very much.
Selected at random, and wow! what a terrific poem. If random sampling always throws up these gems, what a consistent and accomplished writer this indicates. Patrick
At the world's end towards the doomsday souls are hand-in-hand but still longing for unborn tomorrow? This is a wonderful poem Sandra.
This is very strong writing, leaves us admiring your talent Thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X
The first two lines had me hooked - wonderful images and beautifully unforced rhymes. Warmest wishes, Justine.
Kudos...This is a great example of rhyme that doesn't abuse the flow, feeling, etc... of a poem.
'the future is uncertain and the end is always near' Jim Morrison
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this is amazing write..........the depth of your meaning capsizes the reader...keeps him hooked...........wow is the word