Saturday, March 4, 2006

Beyond That Final Blip Of Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bernstein wept.
Too late.
Fifteen years alive
this beautiful woman
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Gina Onyemaechi 04 March 2006

Wasn't expecting such blatantly brutal and disturbing imagery, Charles. It's shaken me, but of course, I couldn't turn away. An extremely high-impact poem. Warm regards, Gina.

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kskdnj sajn 04 March 2006

Glad I woke up and had some coffee before I took this read on charles. An excellent display of a sad truth. The human ability to continue breeding though without moral conscious, has always left me in wonder.

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Brilliant as ever. The tragedy of humanity!

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