Beyond Remedy Comments

These days We all We've Lost In a world devastated to have Hearts own a tight these days.

I like your poem.Its very intense and you are not weak dear if you can write poems like this

Thanks for writing such a weird poem. I would be interestd in knowing the person whom u have portrayed in ur poem. Totally stupendous!

Thank you for your invitation. This is such a beautiful dark poem. So vivid. You pulled me right inside. You have amazing talent. Keep writing. I will read your others as i have time. I look forward to reading them.

Omg I love this poem. You are amazingly talented.

I don't have to tell you that you got talent, this...you already know. Keep up the great work, i must say, i'm thirsty for more: D

Wow Sameera, I love this poem! Dark & intense.

Thanks for inviting me to read. I like the interjections, the pauses that they demand to be emphasised, as it really teams well with the rhyme to undermine the last stanza where you call the people accusing you of being mad, mistaken. They add together to create the image of a wide eyed person, that ironically looks at nothing, just stares through everything, with the contrast and indecision of holding both a rose and a gun, telling everyone they are sane. Very powerful. And I'm not totally sure which is more dangerous; the gun, or the rose...