Beyond Recognition Comments

This is a fascinating poem Indira, exploring the dark side of love and loss. The repetition of the first four lines (as a chorus) works beautifully to give shape to the poem and the final stanza is elegantly and cleverly concluded. A beautiful poem. Worth a second read. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

...reduced to a whiff of thin vapour... ...burnt in the firmament of an unadulterated desire...love changes us, often makes us look like shadows of our former selves... it's true. Wonderful poem for Christmas, Indira!