Beyond Reason Comments

Very expressed good write

Nicely done. Very intense and well understood. I like how you set this up and I love the ending. Deep and full of feeling. Good job! Debbie

Cor this poem has a resounding feeling of achievement in its very core...fabulous work, 'What noble cause in fine poetic deed this exhilarating poem is. Yes! You survived and it is surprising how we gather pace and possessions as time flashes by...like the lightning coarsing through your poem. Brilliant, makes me want to run a marathon! or get on my bike! lol Smiling at you Tai