Beyond Reach! Comments
The colored clouds of the autumnal sky with a glistening gray base
are temptations enough for me
to getmore close to myself, and
inviting me
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To dare to be brave and truly embrace all that life has to offer and to find inspiration, to fly so high with words tumbling into such beauty and grace!
Dear Shahziaji, December 1 is your birthday.... Many many HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY Be writing, be visiting and be here and on FB.. Greetings from M.D Dinesh Nair, Aswath Ramalingam. PS: It is Aswath who reminded me of your birth day and he has requested me to greet you on behalf of him when I greet you today....
A beautiful poem Shahzia. This poem is an exception. Love it.
A powerful poem that appears to talk about the unreachable but still within the reach of a reader and attracting the appreciation of all.
It is human nature to have dreams always high and challenging. But still we kkeepstruggling to reach them. Nice expression of thought in the background of natural landscape makes it rich.
Nature always inspire us a lesson, more questions we have now but answer is always near...i like the discovery of natural situation in daily..beautiful thoughts! _Soul
Looking up at the sky the clouds have many different hues. It can change from a light blue to misty gray. Through all of those beautiful colors there holds mysteries of the universe. They can melt into rain drops or a violent stormy weather. The stars are also beautiful in twinkling array of sparkles. One can not touch them but one can have lofty thoughts about them. Nice.
Poetry! A perpetual stream of sacred consciousness flowing ever and ever beyond planets and stars and even plenty of universe. There is no question about your write.
Poetry is beyond theoretical, its an instinctive talent beyond reach by ordinary people....its a special gift like the rainbow!
Beyond reach but close in dreams and even closer to hearts are such so dreaming is never useless. A sweet poem, dear Shazia
Surely your style and merits is realy IN and in deep with poetry but honestly these lines it's beyond reach, hard to catch your heart...though i have good vibes but arn't too much heavey strokes, that make it arty- crafty and pretentious? Feelings and emotions reign every line...and too lil description.. So it is confirmed by many more desperate attempts to compose a verse ending in failure... Apology if got otherotherwise...
Wah shaander shairi! One of yor masterpiece strokes of poem. Marvelous dreamy n imaginative! Eid mbaruk belatd. :)
beautiful imagery of cotton clouds. o to fly so high on the sky useless dreaming. nice writing Shahzia.
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7/19/2025 7:46:42 PM # 1.0.0
A colorful and creative composition!