Exceeding the limits of human spirit
The pain unending
Arising out of the human disorder
A whole section of humanity
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moving and genuinely intense, such feeling. Humans are capable of the unthinkable, and surviving it as well. Thank you for sharing this valuable piece.
'...The remedy for the pain is going beyond pain...' this line is the soul of this heart felt poem...good lamenting here, sadiq...you brought this deep out of your heart 10
very intense... powerful worlds the whole sorrow of a war field is in this... hope for a peaceful world... a good thought... pain anquish and tears a brilliant work very expressive..10 Rema
A very deep poem about serious matters. Can you really stop feeling pain when human helplessness should touch every human being. This pain is endless, I guess, as long as people will die because of absurdities and/or lack of concern and needs... Very well penned...10
What a world we live in when people in some countries don't have primary needs and others in more developed countries are dying literally of solitude. Thanks for this poem.
what a sad and touching write sadiq..............so sad...and the pain...this is one of your better works......made me teary eyed........very well penned...you must be very brave