Monday, October 6, 2014

Beyond Our Resting Grave Comments

Rating: 4.8

Delete me from your life
As I have caused you so much strife.
Wondering where your heart belongs
As I have caused you so much wrong.
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Alice Cordy
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Chinedu Dike 19 February 2015

I commend your talent for coming up with well articulated poems with lovely rhyme scheme. It's not usually easy to create beautiful rhyme patterns while retaining coherence of thought. Thanks for sharing.

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Lyn Paul 18 February 2015

A great line, I've destroyed our heart song Just think of all the time and emotion in those love letters. A book of love letters would be an idea. Thank you Alice hope your heart is shining

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Michael Mcparland 07 October 2014

A wonderful piece for clearly an old friend you still care about and truly do still love very much. I share in those feelings and sentiment with you. A 10 for sure. Reached deep. A painful and very touching poem. Not painful in a bad though.

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