Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Beyond My Reality Comments

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Further then these rolling hills
Beyond this sky’s powerful thunder,
Longer then these boundless sea,
I long to seek safe refuge.
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Melissa Coventry
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Yelena M. 13 April 2009

Yet I stay, Closer to this empty home, Where the sky is lucid and full of dust, On these continent plains... Truly breathtaking lines here! Thanks for sharing, Melissa. A.

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Matt Johnston 04 December 2008

There are some good stanzas here. This speaks of a great depth of emotion.

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Jerry Hughes 20 February 2008

..........................................................................delightful!

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Mary Gordley 19 February 2008

Totally beautiful write. Thank you Melissa.

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Melissa Coventry

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