Beyond My Dreams Comments

'Drowsy lips...deaf rainbow' Absolutely beautiful! You are very talented in describing things with your mind rather than with the obvious words.

This is such a beautifull poem....I love it...10++++ keep writing definitly

Really a fascinating poem. This symbolisms and metaphors are excellent

wonderful poem indeed....word is not enough to say a words....i was freeze....a dream that touches reality and the immortality of dream hope you can share more of what is deep inside of you...i love reading your poem..thank you for sharing...God bless...a 10++++++

Amazing images, but the stanza with the diaphonous, deaf rainbow is more than stunning!

beyond my dreams are the pictures of colorful love..very beautiful poem..grace

That carries me so softly Towards a mysterious paradise On a diaphanous, deaf rainbow Soaring in these iridescent skies........... oh what a captivating dream of love that seems to paint love o0f colors...........yet delighting by imagery, qite excellent.10+++, thanks for sharing

smell your drowsy lips Those lily-perfumed petals Of your blooming bliss breath

thats soo romantic, sweet, and tender

an excelent romantic poem. shan

This is a perfect poem…. It is me want to dream a dreams