Beyond My Control….. Comments

Full of affection and devotion, lovely piece with good rhyming scheme.

I love the rhymes and the tactile devices you use to show its poetic harmony. I voted 10 for this. Please read my poem too ' Legacy to My Mother'. thanks.

i gave you a 10, and placed this on my fav list.good job.you and i have almost the same style of writing, so i am biased..lol..read intertwined souls, and through the tough times, for they are similar to this..actually you might want to read a few others, i think you might enjoy them, for as i stated we have the same style

good rhymes and lots of love ummmmm-10 anjali

Great use of rhyme to express your feeling in this passion laced piece...well composed and thought out....10

a passionate devoted write!