Friday, April 8, 2011

Beyond My Colour Comments

Rating: 4.5

I stand for what i believe,
even if it means hell,
i put my hand in a stove,
as from it i'll exhale,
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DICKSON MSETI
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Jinal Oswal 15 September 2011

Its great, the inner strength is explained so well. Its quite encouraging, at least we can stand for what we want out of this life.

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Unwritten Soul 04 September 2011

Powerful message here...I like the spirit you carry in your soul! That's make the poem worth to read..it has intimate passion to share :) _Unwritten Soul

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