Wind was hot and lonely was day,
walking patiently on my way,
I came by a Patli tree,
staring on me smilingly said he.
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this is possibly one of the best work I've seen in the past weeks. i enjoyed the read. the last few lines very inspiring must say, great work
WELCOME to the Poetry World dear Chandra! Wow! What a way to enter into the Poetry World with such an amazing and well crafted write where Beauty and Talent are magically blended making this poem absolutely thought provoking! 10+++ Hoping that you will keep inspiring the World with more of your touching works! God Bless You! Romeo from New York City! Love and Peace for always!
thanks kelvin and romeo..................i am hopeful that your suggestions will help me a lot......again thanks a ton