Beyond Horizons Comments

Great expression. Admired your last three lines. An adorable poem...5 stars.

I tend to be silent Confused and tempted To put a signature In your heart. to be washed away in romance and real and true love. my heart's desire. tony

Captivating last three lines... Beautifully composed.

to be washed away by your waves poetic, romantic

Beautiful poem pregnant with deep thoughts. The doubt and feelings of inability that we feel when many a deep oceans are there to be crossed is expressed so poetically. Thank you for sharing the poem and thank you so much for your comment on my poem.

Great poem Of expectations

A distinct ending that revolts against dependence, weakness and despair, aesthetic and imaginative portrayal that gives the poetic image more strength, well done for this wonderful work

I am in the sand To be washed away By your waves.

Love Stopped Like Small Waves Fading your love is stopped like small waves fading on the sandy shore unable to cross a vast ocean without a ship silent confused tempted now is not time of crossing wave tide washes sand out under feet Inspired by the poem 'Beyond Horizons' by the poet Suresh Kumar EK. Dedicated to the poet Suresh Kumar EK.by Suresh Kumar EK.

your love is stopped like small waves fading at the sandy shore, unable to cross a vast ocean without a ship silent confused tempted, now is not the time of crossing wave tide washes sand out under feet

Sometimes we become speechless facing love unable to express our oceanic feelings.The feelings overwhelm us and we get swept away like sand by the waves. A great poem, thanks for sharing.

A fine poem that captures an unrequited love. Poignant and well depicted.

Sometimes, we fail to put a signature in a heart we wish to....! But don't be disappointed! Nothing is over... more chances will arise! A nice poem on unreciprocated love.

Confused and tempted To put a signature In your heart But i couldnt my joy I am in the sand To be washed away By your waves. Very fine expressions of romantic love full of desire in a poetic way. love this poem. tony

Unable to cross Confused and tempted... //.... You have drawn a very objective picture of a lover's condition. Thanks for sharing.