Thursday, February 5, 2009

Beyond Each Horizon. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just as far as a distant hill you are.
Every star helps guide me to your heart.
My souls delights in seeing you not far
From me, each night and day that we're apart.
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Fay Slimm
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Sue Sie 09 February 2009

A lovely poem...your words create a picture full of anticipation. Lets hope the wait wont be too long....10+

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Herbert Nehrlich1 06 February 2009

You know, you just can't go past Romantics like Fay and m'self. We are special in that we have eyes and ears and tactile faculties that the Gods themselves are envious of. Would you kiss anyone but a Romantic? Great stuff but not unexpected: -) Hxx

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Lynda Robson 05 February 2009

A love worth waiting for Fay, really beautiful and heart warming words, 10 Lynda xx

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Tia Maria 05 February 2009

Real love... really brought tears to my eyes Fay... real 10/10 poetry. Luv T

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Fiona Davidson 05 February 2009

This is a stunning piece Fay...so beautiful...thank you...Fi...10+++

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Ency Bearis 05 February 2009

awesome poem...such a moving and touching verses...10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 February 2009

Oh wow, it's beautiful poetry Fay wonderful write... Andy 10

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Kris Smith 05 February 2009

Beautiful piece of poetry deep and feeling may your dreams be proved 10 +++ Chris

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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