Friday, May 1, 2020

Beyond Decay! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.4

When we are born, we are bound to decay,
Decay in the valley of time,
Often we forget this sour truth,
So mean, yet straight and strange at times,
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Ashika Murali Acharya
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What lies beyond decay, Is your place in someone's heart Congratulations having been made a part of POD...10

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 May 2020

beautiful poem penned; superb 10+ //_/ birth begins to compose the elegy of death to build anything start to countdown the day of expiration declined everywhere but with the cycle of birth......

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 May 2020

" Choooose the chases well To stay immortal in the valley of time" . Superb conceptualization. Well deserved poem of the day. Hearty congrats.

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Savita Tyagi 25 May 2020

What lies beyond decay is your place in someone's heart.....beautiful poem. Congratulations for being chosen as member poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 May 2020

A wonderful piece! Many congratulations for this valuable poem being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Rajnish Manga 25 May 2020

'we are bound to decay.... But what lies beyond decay? ' From here starts a journey into the unseen and unknown. Nice philosophical exploration. Thanks.

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Ruta Mohapatra 25 May 2020

To live on in someone's heart! Isn't it what life is all about! Thanks for sharing and congrats on poem of day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 May 2020

A wonderfully crafted brilliant blank verse. Congrats on your featured piece...10++

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 May 2020

But what lies beyond decay? Is just what you made one feel, That echoes and reigns in a heart, When your name is told. A very fine poem indeed. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2020

In the valley of time! Love and life, If your heart and mind are in someone's heart; Love and friendship, Musing along, Life and death. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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