I thank God for this day.
The beauty he created; the sun, did her sexy catwalk
And went back stage, she did not return
The queen mother in this fight of nature... Oh, wasted no
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feministic! i like the twist to the idea.. devil is a woman? it worth a thought! ..for all things created are beautiful..womanly.. and women are beautiful... are men women? for men too are created... some controversy here.. Stella! We need a second reflection on this poem of yours... it raises more issues than addressed.. can you do part two..but it does what poem does best.. make us to think.. feel..and wonder.....it is a great poem
Poetically the soft and beautiful is she and the strong is he. It would be right and good if you use Capital to refer He(the Creator) .A nice poem.
Fantastia Stella, great imagery and good flow...