Coldness came from the clear.
Beyond the clouds sight of ear.
Playing songs to fill my head.
Raptured hearts full of dread.
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A well written poem the feelings and emotions are very clearly expressed...
Very well written for such idea and it is very nice poem. Reality of human heart and emotion. A bitter fight between love and heart must be judged by mind, guide by faith and rules by God. Excellent and thanks for nice poem.
‘…Capture the moment of eternal flight…. I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow’ Excellent! Splendid! ten dr. sakti
'I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow.' nicely penned given 10
Nice usage of words to describe the feelings in this poem. Emotions are clearly visible in this poem, which is something truly great about this poem of yours.
lovely write...the songs of nature will fill our ears...great
nice; the last two lines are superb. a high thinking person.
poignant and deep...i liked the wisdom and philosophy inside...ten for this Joseph...
Gone from the present story of tomorrow. I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow. I love those lines... this has nice flow... I really like this written well. good job. Becca
Each person's interpretatation will be different, Mine is that of a skilled hand Love duncan X
Lovely flow to this poem, I loved the last two lines, thanks Lynda xx 10
great flow of words.I love the last line.Wonderful Love, Meggie
This read so good with such a nice flow, like all your others...
a very fine and soft composition with almost perfect rhyming...great job Joe. a 10.
well expressed and well said! ! ! ! ! this is very captivating! ! ! ! !