Friday, October 29, 2010

Beyond A Fake Smile Comments

Rating: 4.9

Everyone is drawing a fake smile.
It seems hard, just like walking a mile.
I'm sad because we are all sad.
This is so bad and it's making me mad.
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merna ibrahim
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Mrs.Joseph =) 02 December 2010

A very good poem! Honest and compassionate :) the best poem ive read in a while! keep up the good work :)

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Sally Plumb Plumb 21 November 2018

I know how you feel. Your piece reminds me of something I wrote.It’s called The Slow Walk.

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Mrs.Joseph =) 02 December 2010

A very good poem! Honest and compassionate :) the best poem ive read in a while! keep up the good work :)

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Mrs.Joseph =) 02 December 2010

A very good poem! Honest and compassionate :) the best poem ive read in a while! keep up the good work :)

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Reem Ehab 07 November 2010

What can I say? ! beautiful Merna =) ...I love your simple way in writing and expressing. Everyone can read, understand and love it. Everyday you prove that you're better than the day before.Great job Merna!

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Blue Eyes 03 November 2010

i love all your poems, but this one is deeper than the others concerning meaning...thanks

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