Sunday, November 30, 2014

Beyond Comments

Rating: 4.9

Go beyond the past.
Go beyond the present..

Will you love me when night
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Fabrizio Frosini
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Terry Dawson 22 March 2020

Lovely strands in this great little poem. The course of our lives are seldom clear and we struggle to know which path should be ours or where it will lead to, yet we persevere.

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Unwritten Soul 02 February 2020

Beautiful! beyond the past beyond the present...the opening is a big one " will you love me when..." what directly comes to my mind is to end the poem with: will you love me even after your last breath will this love will be remembered beyond our life May it survive forever

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 February 2020

glad you like my poem 'BEYOND', dear Soul. A good friend's appreciation is a blessing Cheers F.

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Michael Walker 25 September 2019

Quite an intense, dramatic love poem. It has a broad sweep across the past into the present. 'We can't help but go on'-a motto which I have adopted in life.

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Fabrizio Frosini 29 September 2019

you are ''KINDNESS made a Person'', dear Michael. Thank you

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A B Faniki 07 September 2019

I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing such thoughtful piece.

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Fabrizio Frosini 29 September 2019

it's truly nice of you. thank you so much

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Michael Walker 17 July 2019

You ask the question that matters: 'Will you love me? ' Life can be hard and unforgiving.

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Fabrizio Frosini 21 July 2019

''Life can be hard and unforgiving'' yes, really...

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2019

go go, go beyond the everything where the love sang of our unity for everlasting.......///

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2019

:) thanks for reading

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Captivating piece, raw and honest

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 July 2019

thank you, Esther! I've answered your msg: truly hope you'll be with us soon :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 November 2018

Hi Doctor, Wonderful poem. What was once their souls.... Will you love me when night Falls and nordic winds blow All those drunken eyes out? Great, captivating poetry..No wonder why this magnificent poem is among topmost poems on ph. Well done. Congratulations Doctor. Onto MyPoemList, with full honours

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 November 2018

it's too kind of you, dear Unnikrishnan. Thank you so much. Blessings.

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 November 2018

BTW, your ''No Place Exists in the Universe by That Name'' is truly a very good ''poem of witness''. Congratulations!

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 11 November 2018

Amazing thought sir....very very beautiful poem.............

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Fabrizio Frosini 17 November 2018

it is very, very kind of you, dear Bhagabat. Thank you

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Pierre Krusketta 10 August 2018

Fab, your poem is number 12 in the Top 500 Member Poems list, and you have 4 poems in the first 12 places! !))) Nocturnal is number 1, Tenderness number 3, You & I number 9, Beyond 12th)))))) GREAT POETRY))

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 August 2018

this is very kind of you, dear PK! gracias

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Sandra Feldman 13 April 2018

La nostalgia cubre el tiempo de fria escarcha, helada y discutible paz Pero los versos profundos, Los que como estos viene del alma No pierden su belleza, Jamas. Un gratisimo y bello poem

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 April 2018

a beautiful comment indeed! Thank you so much, dear Sandra Blessings

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Terry Dawson 09 April 2018

Wonderful! I feel the soul of the poem even though I flounder, perhaps, at its meaning

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Fabrizio Frosini 09 April 2018

thank you so much, Terry: it's very kind of you.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 November 2017

Our hearts won't heal in small dreams speechless...

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 November 2017

so kind of you, dear Ellias!

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 November 2017

ohh.. I've just read your words on my page (author's page) : I am the one who's speechless... Thank you, my friend.

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Bharati Nayak 19 August 2017

Go beyond the past. Go beyond the present.. Will you love me when night Falls and nordic winds blow All those drunken eyes out? - - - - - - - -These lines are like a beautiful tune humming at heart string.

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 August 2017

thank you so much for your kind words, dear Bharati. BTW, do you like our latest book?

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Bharati Nayak 27 August 2017

United we Stand: Poets Against Terror - - Yes, I Iike it very much.Like the first book it unites the voices of poets across the world irrespective of their religion, race or country.Thank you very much for including my poem in the Anthology.

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 August 2017

[after your reply: ] my pleasure indeed, be sure

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Antonio Maes 23 May 2017

this is POETRY in its highest meaning

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Fabrizio Frosini 31 May 2017

you flatter me.. thank you, Antonio

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 14 December 2016

This so passionate and highly poetic. Deep loev beyond time and space. Alas, Our hearts won't heal in small dreams. Regretfully, we can't help but go on. Sure you should go in spite of everything.

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 December 2016

thank you for visiting and commenting on my poem, Ahmed. Gracias.

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Mamma Rosa 12 December 2016

Will you love me when night - Falls and nordic winds blow - All those drunken eyes out? the big question! how strong is our love? small dreams are not for LOVE! beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 December 2016

deeply pleased to read your comment. Thanks so much!

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Csilla Ash 19 November 2016

Our hearts won’t heal in small dreams how true! reading your beautiful poem i can't help but think about the time we are living in, with Trump as the next USpresident and the many bad things in this awful present-day world ((

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Fabrizio Frosini 20 November 2016

''never losing hope'', was a saying I shared.. but now I'm not so confident about what the future is going to bring.. Thank you for commenting on my poem, Csilla

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Lapo Mannelli 10 November 2016

yes, true, it's poignantly beautiful!

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 November 2016

thanks, Lapo, and thanks again!

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Alix Mangerian 07 October 2016

Lovely balance between longing and regret...indeed, I'm not sure it is possible to feel one without the other. Also, I want to mention my mind is blown by the idea of capturing verse in another language.

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Fabrizio Frosini 07 October 2016

thank you very much, Alix, for reading and commenting on my poem.

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