I often sit alone and think,
brood over and speak to myself.
These small moments lift silence
within the self, do help.I stay.
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I stay, I hum, I observe, I travel, I walk. Each aptly described in a lilting verse. Well done!
dear nikunj.....the feeling to hold on infinity in a moments flash of truth.these moments are precious and special.loved the poem! you write so well. ritty
You have described meditation so well and I particularly liked 'one moment when stretched seems infinite'. As a meditator myself, I feel there is so much within this poem to entice others into peace and love. 10 Karin
it's that experience beyond that nudges one towards self-expression...u captured that state...
Excellent poem and well composed Simple but meaningful. Enjoyed reading it Thanks
You should know that what you write isn't worth enuf a comment..'coz the feelings and art of a poet can never be justified simply by that. I like the way you feel: -)
Nice poem attempting to understanding the sixth sence and rejuvanating the kundaleni, it is beyond the scoring of internal energy, thanks for sharing,10.
Silence is golden always...helps us to introsepect and ponder on our own self...on our own daily chores and commitments thereby to correct ourselves....simple but superb poem in superb flow....thank you
Nik I spnd 2 hours every morning in my garden sitting on a log doing just what you described so beautifully here. I highly recomend it to everybody. It's amazing who you meet when you sit and meditate.-10
this, to me, is about the poets mind.. i write best when im in a daze.. when im deaf to the world and i make my own :) . you seem to do the same.
There is a saying that silence is golden, as in and beyond the silence, one can think better and reach the height of success. The poem is well composed. The flow is very simple and nice too.
Lovely poem! Yes, silence sometimes feels so nourishing, so reassuring..moments can be stretched into the infinite, unfathomed distances can be crossed in seconds, and impossible becomes possible!