Tuesday, November 17, 2009

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I often sit alone and think,
brood over and speak to myself.
These small moments lift silence
within the self, do help.I stay.
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Nikunj Sharma
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Jasbir Chatterjee 25 February 2010

Lovely poem! Yes, silence sometimes feels so nourishing, so reassuring..moments can be stretched into the infinite, unfathomed distances can be crossed in seconds, and impossible becomes possible!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

well, this is well composed. nice job!

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george george 20 December 2009

I stay, I hum, I observe, I travel, I walk. Each aptly described in a lilting verse. Well done!

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Ritty Patnaik 18 December 2009

dear nikunj.....the feeling to hold on infinity in a moments flash of truth.these moments are precious and special.loved the poem! you write so well. ritty

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Robbie Squires 14 December 2009

just simpily great. fantastic job

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Hippie Girl 13 December 2009

I can relate to the feeling that you put in this poem!

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Anju Addanki 29 November 2009

Its just superb very well written.

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You have described meditation so well and I particularly liked 'one moment when stretched seems infinite'. As a meditator myself, I feel there is so much within this poem to entice others into peace and love. 10 Karin

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Surya . 26 November 2009

sitting in contemplation.beautifully expressed. voted10 surya

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Surya . 26 November 2009

sitting in contemplation.beautifully expressed. voted10 surya

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Indira Babbellapati 26 November 2009

it's that experience beyond that nudges one towards self-expression...u captured that state...

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Ravi Sathasivam 26 November 2009

Excellent poem and well composed Simple but meaningful. Enjoyed reading it Thanks

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 25 November 2009

You should know that what you write isn't worth enuf a comment..'coz the feelings and art of a poet can never be justified simply by that. I like the way you feel: -)

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Vinod Kumar 25 November 2009

Nice poem attempting to understanding the sixth sence and rejuvanating the kundaleni, it is beyond the scoring of internal energy, thanks for sharing,10.

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Meggie Gultiano 25 November 2009

so beautiful and relaxing

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Indira Renganathan 25 November 2009

Silence is golden always...helps us to introsepect and ponder on our own self...on our own daily chores and commitments thereby to correct ourselves....simple but superb poem in superb flow....thank you

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Patrick A. Martin 25 November 2009

Nik I spnd 2 hours every morning in my garden sitting on a log doing just what you described so beautifully here. I highly recomend it to everybody. It's amazing who you meet when you sit and meditate.-10

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this, to me, is about the poets mind.. i write best when im in a daze.. when im deaf to the world and i make my own :) . you seem to do the same.

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Carol Gall 25 November 2009

this has texture great write 10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 November 2009

There is a saying that silence is golden, as in and beyond the silence, one can think better and reach the height of success. The poem is well composed. The flow is very simple and nice too.

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