Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Beyond Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are days our path won't cross but meet me
in the place beyond our thoughts where whispers
are loud and nightmares that inspires
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Lorraine Bennike
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Naila Rais 29 April 2018

A nice write.... Keep it up...10 ++... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Lorraine. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Meggie Gultiano 21 December 2008

so far, by my standard, this is a great poem, written from your heart.And this is a lovely piece.You penned it well.An excellent job you have done here.

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 June 2008

A most creative poem. This is very good. It also repeats the 'meet me ' portion. This is most memorable and takes the poem to another level. I cannot give it good marks for clarity and communication however. Good but not great. Greenwolfe 1962

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 April 2008

heart wishful cajoled by the gleams of love dream seems to rave up by the art of the thoght rhythm when true never yet blemishes the blue soul yet razzles beyond the colours quantum...................yet luscious green by the passin........excellent write, i do admire,10/10, thanks for sharing ...................

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Chan Jee 16 April 2008

i think you have expressed your feelings in a very nice way.i like to be your friend.you are precious.thanks bye

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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 16 April 2008

quitcool, nice page. keep writting............................................. ................................................. .................................kay

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James B. Earley 16 March 2008

My friend indeed it is a privilege to recognize this splendid work as unquestionably a 10! Brilliant thought process........thanks.

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