There are days our path won't cross but meet me
in the place beyond our thoughts where whispers
are loud and nightmares that inspires
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A good start with a nice poem, Lorraine. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
so far, by my standard, this is a great poem, written from your heart.And this is a lovely piece.You penned it well.An excellent job you have done here.
A most creative poem. This is very good. It also repeats the 'meet me ' portion. This is most memorable and takes the poem to another level. I cannot give it good marks for clarity and communication however. Good but not great. Greenwolfe 1962
heart wishful cajoled by the gleams of love dream seems to rave up by the art of the thoght rhythm when true never yet blemishes the blue soul yet razzles beyond the colours quantum...................yet luscious green by the passin........excellent write, i do admire,10/10, thanks for sharing ...................
i think you have expressed your feelings in a very nice way.i like to be your friend.you are precious.thanks bye
quitcool, nice page. keep writting............................................. ................................................. .................................kay
My friend indeed it is a privilege to recognize this splendid work as unquestionably a 10! Brilliant thought process........thanks.
A nice write.... Keep it up...10 ++... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila