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Beyond that bright sun, I see a brighter sun
Beyond that cool moon, I see a cooler moon
Beyond those shining stars, I see a bunch of lovely stars
Beyond the barren land, I see a stretch of fertile land
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to see beyond is a valuable gift. it reminds us how lucky we are to have even if it is only a little.
behind the lines of the poem there i behold a heart full of good will and cheer...
Yes, we exist only on the edge of life. There is so much more out there that we are incapable of contemplating from our shallow perspective. But since this is all we believe right now, best to create the most glorious life possible while we're living. Wonderful poem, Subbaraman - you expand our minds with your words. Linda :)
A very positive and fine poem this one Subbaraman so very well written
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7/23/2025 1:13:47 PM # 1.0.0
Beyond all the words in this poem, I see the poet as - selfless, optimistic, empathic, simple, straightforward, godfearing, humane, patient, contented and motivational. I hope I have not left out any other qualities as evident from this composition. A beautiful write, indeed! They say: the face is the mirror of the mind. This kind of composition is the mirror of the heart, mind and spirit.