Bewitched Comments

I found this one interesting. More like a story than a poem. What I want to know is did you get back together? and if so did it work out? Tell me tell me I am so nosey. HUGS

How romantic! This was a happily ever after...

This goes to show the impact that some loved ones have in our lives....still years later...some people we can't forget and hold dear to our hearts. Though we may take different paths...there's always something that brings us back together...and then we wonder...what if? Beautiful poem. Princess

David, bewitching is right, what a wonderful poem that cast a real spell. Some old loves hold a special place in our hearts always. I have one like that who crops up in my poems from time to time.. Beautiful poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

The longing that is so beautifully expressed in your poem is amazing! I like it...~Anne

It is nice to read this and see that some love really does last forever even though perhaps the two are no longer together..........marci.m. :)