Bewildered Soul Comments

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Beauty

This is one haunting question that follows each and everyone in this life. It is the mystery that leads to this exotic spirit of questioning that knows no answer. We have to satisfy ourselves by not thinking far beyond or far behind. mandara

'Man, know thyself! ', implies that you have to do it on your own, God is not going to do the job of finding the answers to existential questions. But as a poem, you have accomplished a beautiful piece here, very smooth and terrific write! Thanks for sharing! An obvious ten.

Glad that someone askd this question. Read my 2 poems Can I and Can I be a poet too

Vaibhav, you write very well, who am I is a question many of us ponder over, you might have to fly high to find the answer. Keep writing so I can enjoy. Bob Blackwell

that is the question I always ask Vaibhav...we have lost our identity....who are? ...what are we suppose to do.....life is a journey full of questions i guess..and i never know when i can find answers to them....nice write... thanks for this one 10++

Subtanial poem, Vabhav. Worthy of its attention

Existence and its questions, put to great effect.

SO AMAZING! ! ! i cant stop reading it again and again....

Very eloquently and passionately written. May your soul be enlightened. Congratulations! Your work deserves only the best. Warm regards, Sandra

Bewildered Soul...so wonderfully written.. with great concepts...AWAKENING to one's soul.... a question with humility and honesty... a question to Him is a question to our own self too and the humble acceptance of who we are... God knows you by heart.....and the answer is within you.... 10+++++

Questions that are put most intelligently and poetically.

The consummate poem about the consummate question. I thought you placed the issue well. In the proper text. Masterful treatment. GW62

Stunning peice of poetry, fully deserving of its ranking

Wonderful poem. Directing reader's mind to analyze 'who I am' I don't think the writer has 'bewildered soul' He is towards the right path. He recognizes the variabilty of human mind and the nature.... This is what we really mean mindfulness to go towards the destination. Wonderful piece of poetry. Worth millions, not merely 10...lol

Keep on searching and discovering yourself and God will surely show you your identity and you will be able to refine your lingering soul............10

Vaibhav, This is an awesome poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! This question baffles us all, A strange mix-up of opposites on this earth we crawl. CP

very well written...a very basic question unanswered..great..10

bewildered soul- who am i- man's search for meaning. very well writtenprofound.... Mamta