Saturday, March 21, 2020

Bewildered...... Comments

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Storm crashed in, shattering everything
Bits and pieces, lying stock-still
Eyeballs swirling round, very next moment
Stopped gazing motionless
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 March 2020

The wrath of Mother Nature is vividly depicted . Great imagery.

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Thank you Rose for your comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2020

Motionless grazing is stopped as storm crashed. This is an amazing and thought provoking poem shared really.

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Thank you Kumar for your comment

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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