Sunday, July 14, 2013

Bewildered Comments

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Your angry eyes tried to order me away-
Your voice cut me as would a newly sharpened dagger-
You are so young, but I found you to be more than threatening-
You would be stunning, if you did not wear that mask of rage.
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Khairul Ahsan 15 July 2013

This is indeed a soul harrowing tale of a prisoner of unexplained emotions. It touched my heart. As always I was terrified as a wounded wild animal that has no refuge. There is no place to where I could escape-... I feel as I am homeless and cannot find shelter from my own madness.....and, I find myself prisoner inside the world of my fear....these are some of the lines that overwhelmed me with grief. I wish you well, poet!

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Claudia Krizay

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